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xfirefly9x ([personal profile] xfirefly9x) wrote2007-05-03 03:17 am

#011 The Cold Hard Truth (River)

Title: The Cold Hard Truth
Fandom: Firefly
Characters: River
Prompt: #011 Bodies
Word Count: 100
Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] ficlets100. Tag to 'Serenity' (BDM).

Bodies. There were so many of them, cold and lifeless, staring up at her with unseeing eyes. They had all just lain down and stopped. They had stopped eating, sleeping, breathing. Everything.

All that remained were their still decaying corpses. In some cases, such as the bodies inside the building complex, they were remarkably preserved making it that more disturbing. They were dead, but still, they talked to her.

They told her things, got inside her head, showing her memories that weren’t her own. They pressed on her mind and wouldn’t let go.

They wanted the truth to come out.

[identity profile] ana-grrl.livejournal.com 2007-05-02 05:24 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I like this. Nice insight to River's head and the things that torment her.
ext_19622: (River - bible)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2007-05-02 05:36 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm glad you like! XD

[identity profile] honeybearbee.livejournal.com 2007-05-02 08:59 pm (UTC)(link)
That was good. And a little creepy.
ext_19622: (River - bible)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2007-05-03 05:01 am (UTC)(link)
Hehe, thanks!

[identity profile] beth-soprano.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 05:43 am (UTC)(link)
Good, but creepy. Is this fic related to the movie?
ext_19622: (Zoe - serenity)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, yeah it's related to the movie. I should've put a spoiler warning on it actually. Thought I'd done that already..

[identity profile] beth-soprano.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 05:59 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, I don't mind spoilers. Most of the time they don't make sense anyways, especially when they're from producers/writers. And if it's a spoiler, it's canon, so why should it matter?
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[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2008-12-31 06:11 am (UTC)(link)
Good good. I understand people not wanting spoilers for the exact reason you put there. It's canon. It's what's going to happen in the series. Sometimes it's nicer to be surprised and go in not knowing what'll happen.