xfirefly9x: (Doggett and Reyes - lab)
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Title: A Misery That Haunts
Fandom: The X Files
Characters: Doggett/Reyes
Prompt: #018 Ache
Word Count: 265
Rating: PG
Summary:
Notes: Written using prompts from [livejournal.com profile] drabble123. Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] dierevolutionar and [livejournal.com profile] ubiquitous_girl for helping with this! :)

Haunted.

That was the only word Monica could think of that fully explained the look on her partner’s face as he re-lived the disappearance of his son. His eyes said it all: cool and blue-grey and so terribly pained with the refreshed knowledge that Luke would never be returned to him.

She was certain he was taking aboard the same blame he had when it first happened. He had always taken so much to heart in the time they’d known each other, and while Monica usually found it endearing, today it was heartbreaking.

It made her heart ache to see him so miserable and had there been anything she could have done to take away his pain, she’d have done it. As she stood by his side, it was all she could do to not reach out and put her arms around him and comfort him.

Instead she watched him as tears welled up in his eyes. She studied the stubble that had grown on his face since she’d last seen him. He hadn’t shaved in weeks. His right eye was badly bruised, likely from a fist fight, as was the rest of his face.

However, nothing was as harsh as the haunted look in his eyes. It was a look she knew she would never forget for the rest of her life.

Taking in a deep and calming breath to collect herself, Monica took action as a gunshot brought her back to the present. Life was moving on and it was time for them to join it.

They could deal with their own personal nightmares later.

Date: 2008-02-04 02:37 pm (UTC)
congo: ([tate] love)
From: [personal profile] congo
Wow, this was amazing. :)
I don't think I've read any Doggett/Reyes fanfic in ages, and yours was really great.
Loved the characterisations because they seem so true to the two of them. The haunted look, the misery, the worries. It just fits. :)

Please more of that soon! *g*

Date: 2008-02-05 12:51 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Doggett and Reyes - star)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Awww, thanks!! :D

Loved the characterisations because they seem so true to the two of them. The haunted look, the misery, the worries. It just fits. :)

*grins*

Please more of that soon! *g*

Sure thing! :)

Date: 2008-02-04 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wasabi-girl1.livejournal.com
Aw, that was terribly sad. Kind of makes me want to watch some of their episodes again. *gasp* Even the ones with no Mulder and Scully! ;)

Date: 2008-02-05 12:41 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Doggett and Reyes - star)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Awww, thanks!! :)

Kind of makes me want to watch some of their episodes again. *gasp* Even the ones with no Mulder and Scully! ;)

:P I have a really strong urge to rewatch their eps now, too!

Date: 2008-02-04 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sapphs.livejournal.com
Wow, that was short and so powerful. Fantastic work!

Date: 2008-02-05 12:47 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Doggett - headset)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Thanks!! :D
Edited Date: 2008-02-05 12:47 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-02-05 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
Loved that, it was so nice to see some Doggett/Reyes fic again. And you definitely got them right, from how she wants to help to the way he's always sort of haunted by it. Nice job :D

Date: 2008-02-05 10:54 pm (UTC)
ext_19622: (Doggett and Reyes - star)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you like it!! :D

...And you definitely got them right, from how she wants to help to the way he's always sort of haunted by it...

I don't know what it is about them, but the few times I've written them so far, I've found them really easy to write. *luvs them* :)

Date: 2008-02-06 12:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
*grin* You know what that means, right?
You'll just have to write more for them sometime.

Date: 2008-02-06 01:18 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Daniel and Cameron)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
I know!! I really do need to write more for them!! I've got a whole prompt table to finish, in fact. *considers writing more now* :)

Date: 2008-02-06 01:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
*waves baked goods in front of you*
Free cookies if you do.

Date: 2008-02-06 01:47 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Doggett - headset)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Awww! I was just going to tell you that bribery won't work on me (I have cookies here already!), but I've just spent the past 5 mins typing up (and continuing) a DRR fic I wrote last night, so that's not gonna work. *headdesk* ;)

So, yes. New DRR fic as soon as I've finished this one. *nods*

Date: 2008-02-06 01:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
*g* Oh well, I'll keep the cookies then.
Hey I get cookies and fic. Sweeeeeet.
I'm glad your muse is on my side this time.

Date: 2008-02-06 02:15 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Ahh! You withhold the cookies, I'll withhold the fic! ;)
*glares at muse*

Date: 2008-02-06 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
Eek. Geez, no need to get violent!
*hands the cookies back*
Nice muse, :)

Date: 2008-02-06 07:19 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Aeryn and John - orange)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Awww, sowwy! I get a little territorial when it comes to cookies. (Okay, I really don't, but hey!) :P
*takes cookies, gives half back* We can share..
*g*

Date: 2008-02-06 07:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
Well at least cookies are worth being a little territorial over :P
*hugs* Best idea yet..

PS. check your email.

Date: 2008-02-06 08:08 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
True. There is that. *g*
*pokes!* :P

Checked.

Date: 2008-02-06 03:19 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Doggett and Reyes - lab)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
Well. That turned out longer than expected!
Would you be up for a quick beta?? ;)

Date: 2008-02-06 05:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
Sorry about that, I ended up going out to dinner kind of suddenly earlier when my grandmother came by.
If you still want a beta I'm around :)

Date: 2008-02-06 07:14 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Chandler)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
No worries. I had a (temporary) LJ black-out for a little while there. It wouldn't load!!
I'm sending the fic your way. Thanks!! :)

Date: 2008-02-06 07:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] odakota-rose.livejournal.com
LJ tends to be evil like that when there's important things going on (fic, for example)

Date: 2008-02-06 08:06 am (UTC)
ext_19622: (Default)
From: [identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com
It does. *nod*

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