#018 A Misery That Haunts (Doggett/Reyes)
Feb. 4th, 2008 09:19 pmTitle: A Misery That Haunts
Fandom: The X Files
Characters: Doggett/Reyes
Prompt: #018 Ache
Word Count: 265
Rating: PG
Summary:
Notes: Written using prompts from
drabble123. Thanks to
dierevolutionar and
ubiquitous_girl for helping with this! :)
Haunted.
That was the only word Monica could think of that fully explained the look on her partner’s face as he re-lived the disappearance of his son. His eyes said it all: cool and blue-grey and so terribly pained with the refreshed knowledge that Luke would never be returned to him.
She was certain he was taking aboard the same blame he had when it first happened. He had always taken so much to heart in the time they’d known each other, and while Monica usually found it endearing, today it was heartbreaking.
It made her heart ache to see him so miserable and had there been anything she could have done to take away his pain, she’d have done it. As she stood by his side, it was all she could do to not reach out and put her arms around him and comfort him.
Instead she watched him as tears welled up in his eyes. She studied the stubble that had grown on his face since she’d last seen him. He hadn’t shaved in weeks. His right eye was badly bruised, likely from a fist fight, as was the rest of his face.
However, nothing was as harsh as the haunted look in his eyes. It was a look she knew she would never forget for the rest of her life.
Taking in a deep and calming breath to collect herself, Monica took action as a gunshot brought her back to the present. Life was moving on and it was time for them to join it.
They could deal with their own personal nightmares later.
Fandom: The X Files
Characters: Doggett/Reyes
Prompt: #018 Ache
Word Count: 265
Rating: PG
Summary:
Notes: Written using prompts from
Haunted.
That was the only word Monica could think of that fully explained the look on her partner’s face as he re-lived the disappearance of his son. His eyes said it all: cool and blue-grey and so terribly pained with the refreshed knowledge that Luke would never be returned to him.
She was certain he was taking aboard the same blame he had when it first happened. He had always taken so much to heart in the time they’d known each other, and while Monica usually found it endearing, today it was heartbreaking.
It made her heart ache to see him so miserable and had there been anything she could have done to take away his pain, she’d have done it. As she stood by his side, it was all she could do to not reach out and put her arms around him and comfort him.
Instead she watched him as tears welled up in his eyes. She studied the stubble that had grown on his face since she’d last seen him. He hadn’t shaved in weeks. His right eye was badly bruised, likely from a fist fight, as was the rest of his face.
However, nothing was as harsh as the haunted look in his eyes. It was a look she knew she would never forget for the rest of her life.
Taking in a deep and calming breath to collect herself, Monica took action as a gunshot brought her back to the present. Life was moving on and it was time for them to join it.
They could deal with their own personal nightmares later.
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Date: 2008-02-04 02:37 pm (UTC)I don't think I've read any Doggett/Reyes fanfic in ages, and yours was really great.
Loved the characterisations because they seem so true to the two of them. The haunted look, the misery, the worries. It just fits. :)
Please more of that soon! *g*
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Date: 2008-02-05 12:51 am (UTC)Loved the characterisations because they seem so true to the two of them. The haunted look, the misery, the worries. It just fits. :)
*grins*
Please more of that soon! *g*
Sure thing! :)
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Date: 2008-02-04 03:45 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-05 12:41 am (UTC)Kind of makes me want to watch some of their episodes again. *gasp* Even the ones with no Mulder and Scully! ;)
:P I have a really strong urge to rewatch their eps now, too!
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Date: 2008-02-04 10:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-05 12:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-05 04:43 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-05 10:54 pm (UTC)...And you definitely got them right, from how she wants to help to the way he's always sort of haunted by it...
I don't know what it is about them, but the few times I've written them so far, I've found them really easy to write. *luvs them* :)
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Date: 2008-02-06 12:57 am (UTC)You'll just have to write more for them sometime.
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Date: 2008-02-06 01:18 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-06 01:30 am (UTC)Free cookies if you do.
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Date: 2008-02-06 01:47 am (UTC)So, yes. New DRR fic as soon as I've finished this one. *nods*
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Date: 2008-02-06 01:49 am (UTC)Hey I get cookies and fic. Sweeeeeet.
I'm glad your muse is on my side this time.
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Date: 2008-02-06 02:15 am (UTC)*glares at muse*
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Date: 2008-02-06 05:47 am (UTC)*hands the cookies back*
Nice muse, :)
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Date: 2008-02-06 07:19 am (UTC)*takes cookies, gives half back* We can share..
*g*
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Date: 2008-02-06 07:35 am (UTC)*hugs* Best idea yet..
PS. check your email.
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Date: 2008-02-06 08:08 am (UTC)*pokes!* :P
Checked.
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Date: 2008-02-06 03:19 am (UTC)Would you be up for a quick beta?? ;)
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Date: 2008-02-06 05:47 am (UTC)If you still want a beta I'm around :)
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Date: 2008-02-06 07:14 am (UTC)I'm sending the fic your way. Thanks!! :)
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Date: 2008-02-06 07:36 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-06 08:06 am (UTC)