#006 Until This Point (John/Elizabeth)

[xfirefly9x]

Title: Until This Point
Fandom: Stargate Atlantis
Characters: John/Elizabeth
Prompt: #006 Amnesia
Word Count: 203
Rating: G
Notes: Written for sg_15_fics. Thanks to luxuria_oceanus for the beta help! ;)

He can’t remember his own name, but he can remember her face.

Tangles of dark hair cascade around her shoulders in curls he longs to run his fingers through. Her eyes are dark and green – not emerald green, but rather a grey green like the murky waters of a dam or dirty lake.

He can hear the music that is her voice ringing through his mind, soft and sweet and yet oddly commanding. He can tell she is strong from her voice alone and wants more than anything to remember who she is and what she means to him.

He knows she means something to him. He can feel it with every fibre of his being. It’s the one thing he can be certain of. It kills him that he can’t be sure if he means anything to her as well.

Closing his eyes for a moment, he tries to recall any other details, anything at all.

His mind blanks.

In all honestly, it doesn’t matter if he can remember his life or not. He’s going to die here and he knows it.

He only wishes he could see her face once more.

That’s what has kept him alive up until this point.

Comments

[momm2five.livejournal.com]

AAAAhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!
Crap . . .
Quick, find another prompt and make it better!!!
LOL!
Great fic, really. I'd like to think he';d remember her face if nothing else . . .good job as usual.

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Hehe, I'm glad you like it! :)
Will have to work on some fluff for them next...

[ankareeda.livejournal.com]

*sniff* Great work. *needs something happy*

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Awww. *hands tissues* I'm glad you like!

*heads off to write some fluff* ;)

[odakota-rose.livejournal.com]

*emo tear*
GAH.
Must my heart be ripped out and smushed!?
Or.. okay yeah maybe so because this is gorgeous..

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

*hands tissue*
Awww!
*attempts to de-smush-ify your heart*
*forces heart back in*
Thanks!! :)

[odakota-rose.livejournal.com]

*attempts to de-smush-ify your heart*
*forces heart back in*

o_O
hee.

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

*grin*

[suehsi.livejournal.com]

wooow. that fic is hard .. but i think its brilliant :P
its short but i think it fits perfectly you the topic you chosed and its a little sparky!sweet before going to bed! well done..

love, torri012

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Thanks! :D

[wanderingsmith.livejournal.com]

that was great. love the feeling of it. and now I'm so going to go to sleep thinking of some amnesia themed fic... sigh

carry on waving luv... literally if you can so be convinced.. epilogue?

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Thanks!! :D

Waving luv literally? Hmmm... I'm getting an idea from that. Not related at all to this fic, but Sparky still. It includes either ropes or sticky substances or both! *ponders* Heh.

Anyway... I'll consider an epilogue but I don't think I will write one, sorry.

[wanderingsmith.livejournal.com]

umm, took me a second to think where my tired brain was when I wrote that...

lol, carry on doing wonderful work, which I'd shortened to carry on, then thought that was too vague, saw that you used the 'wave' thing for comments and... a weird statement was born :)

hey, any sparky fic is good! ummm, I'm going to pull a lorelai and say 'dirty' (g)

sokay. no harm in asking! :)

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Hmmm...yeah. It took me a little while to decode the "waving the luv" bit as well. We shall have to spread the word. 'Tis the year to wave the luv. Or something. *g*

Anyways...

I got about halfway through a new Sparky fic that's looking to be fluff/humour, with hints at dirty. It'll probably be finished and posted on Friday. ;)

Nope, there's none at all. And I may note that down in case I ever get an urge to write a sequel...

[wanderingsmith.livejournal.com]

yay, present for the weekend! :)

'Tis the year to wave the luv!

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Heee! Yeaaahhh. :D

*makes an LJ post to spread the word*

'Tis the year to wave the luv!

(Somewhat like Hallowed are the Ori, don'tcha think? ;P)

[wanderingsmith.livejournal.com]

I was thinking more 'Tis the season to be freezin... (shrug) what can I say, we had -30degC on monday..

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Oh true. That would be more like it (at least for your side of the globe) *nods* Or something to do with melting over here. :P

spread the word! 'tis the year to wave the luv (http://xfirefly9x.livejournal.com/255221.html)

[wanderingsmith.livejournal.com]

ha! weird, another girl I talk to just landed there.. yesterday? or today or the day before? lol, other side of the world timezones get complicated...

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Wow, yeah. I...really couldn't say. Timezones are evil. *nod*

[wanderingsmith.livejournal.com]

so I seek an honest opinion. what do you think? (http://poppydesign.org/wanderingsmith/SGA/pics/Wave1.jpg)

like your icon btw

oh! and though I skipped Hallowed, I did make the link to the waving on my lj post: Theory of origin.... (bows to master :))

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Hmmm...it's pretty good. A little faded... (I can't read the blue text at the bottom right of the pic)...

Thanks. :)

Ookay... :)

[wanderingsmith.livejournal.com]

umm, I should just learn to do research first... I guess the term they use is Path of Origin... I've been out of touch with SG1 too long

sorry. bye. I go hide in the pier with my toys :)

[xfirefly9x.livejournal.com]

Awww, okay. No worries.

:)