xfirefly9x: (Edward and Bella - twilight)
xfirefly9x ([personal profile] xfirefly9x) wrote2009-05-07 12:24 am

Fic: Illusion Of Something Solid (Edward/Bella)

Title: Illusion Of Something Solid
Fandom: Twilight
Characters: Edward/Bella
Prompt: #012 Window
Word Count: 100
Rating: G
Summary: Her gaze is often drawn to the grey sky beyond the reach of her window.
Notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] edwardbella_100. February 4.

Her gaze is often drawn to the grey sky beyond the reach of her window. She has never liked the dreary weather that Forks offers but the way it remains constant (for most of the time) is something she finds comfort in.

Her life lately has been anything but stable and so the dullness of it is a relief to say the least. It reminds her that she is only one person among many, an ant.

It’s only when visions of Edward haunt her mind at such times that she begins to lose faith in the illusion of something solid.

[identity profile] dierevolution.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Very nice :)
ext_19622: (Edward - twilight)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 02:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. (I didn't like how this one turned out tbh.)

[identity profile] andieshep.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesomecakes! Loved it! :D
ext_19622: (Shawn and Juliet)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks! :D

[identity profile] subtlynice.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, lovely. Good to see that comm getting some attention too - there's usually only two people posting there.
ext_19622: (Tru and Jack)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! And erm, yeah.. I kind of was a bit late with posting to that comm. *shrug* Will have to stick it on alerts for future prompts.

[identity profile] subtlynice.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Lol, I'm practically always late when it comes to prompt comms. :)
ext_19622: (Default)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
lol yeah, it's the way to be, isn't it? :P

[identity profile] duskyblues.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Nice. I like it.

Could turn into something really good.
ext_19622: (Edward - twilight)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

Is that a subtle sequel request there? :P

[identity profile] duskyblues.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe. It could be a request to turn this into a fic, yes. :P
ext_19622: (Edward and Bella - twilight)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 03:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Hmmm. Well. :P
I can't promise anything very long but I'll see what I can do.

[identity profile] e-schemer.livejournal.com 2009-05-06 05:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I like the structure, that thud at the end when Edward springs into being, very nice :)
ext_19622: (Edward - twilight)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-07 02:38 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. :)
ext_19622: (Angel - wounded)

[identity profile] xfirefly9x.livejournal.com 2009-05-08 06:29 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks.