Fic: A Vulnerable State (Mac/Stella)
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xfirefly9xTitle: A Vulnerable State
Fandom: CSI NY
Characters: Mac/Stella
Prompt: #003 Illusion
Word Count: 184
Rating: G
Summary: It wasn’t meant to happen this way.
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20_fics. 1/12/09.
He isn’t certain what made him do it. Perhaps it was the thought of losing her, imbedded so far into his brain that he could do nothing but lose himself in her arms at the end of it all. Perhaps he just saw something in her expression that told him it was time. He thinks it was more probably a number of different things.
Whatever the case, he is really quite clueless as to how and why they ended up like this. It had just been a kiss. He had intended it to be a comforting one. A kiss between friends. They both needed it after the events of the day. It wasn’t meant to end with their limbs entangled and her head on his chest and she slept the next morning.
He sighs.
It wasn’t meant to happen this way.
He tries to stop thinking but he can’t help but wonder why she gave into him so easily. Did he take advantage of her in a vulnerable state? Or did she actually want this?
He doesn’t know what answer will scare him more.
Fandom: CSI NY
Characters: Mac/Stella
Prompt: #003 Illusion
Word Count: 184
Rating: G
Summary: It wasn’t meant to happen this way.
Notes: Written for
20_fics. 1/12/09.He isn’t certain what made him do it. Perhaps it was the thought of losing her, imbedded so far into his brain that he could do nothing but lose himself in her arms at the end of it all. Perhaps he just saw something in her expression that told him it was time. He thinks it was more probably a number of different things.
Whatever the case, he is really quite clueless as to how and why they ended up like this. It had just been a kiss. He had intended it to be a comforting one. A kiss between friends. They both needed it after the events of the day. It wasn’t meant to end with their limbs entangled and her head on his chest and she slept the next morning.
He sighs.
It wasn’t meant to happen this way.
He tries to stop thinking but he can’t help but wonder why she gave into him so easily. Did he take advantage of her in a vulnerable state? Or did she actually want this?
He doesn’t know what answer will scare him more.
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Date: 2010-05-10 08:56 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-05-10 03:03 pm (UTC)Random question.. imbedded or embedded? I just glanced over.. think I made a typo, but now can't be sure if I did or not lol.
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Date: 2010-05-10 09:14 am (UTC)however, I feel the need for more now. please?
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Date: 2010-05-10 03:03 pm (UTC)I would but uni is crazy right now.. maybe later.
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Date: 2010-05-10 02:37 pm (UTC)Nice fic. :)
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Date: 2010-05-10 08:21 pm (UTC)Sequel, please?
PS it's good to see someone who's into three of my fandoms. Buffy, CSI (and CSI NY) and Bones.
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Date: 2010-05-10 11:03 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2010-05-11 04:28 am (UTC)Beautiful piece. :)
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Date: 2010-05-12 08:27 am (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2010-05-14 01:37 am (UTC)I like it, to say the least.
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Date: 2010-05-14 02:48 am (UTC)